Which is better for an app's description on App Store? When you see it, you are attracted to download it?

Option A:

Wanna a better coupon than anyone else’s? You need a game for it!

NearByr brings your own local deals with fun. You can unlock and join hilarious coupon games from your favorite stores, and enjoy tons of fun of:

- picking up ‘widgets’ nearby.

- gaining ‘coins’ from them when mature. (no matter they belong to you or your friends^_^)

- buying ‘magics’ with ‘coins’ from local stores.

- taking advantages when check in games with ‘magics’, or just running for your own prize!

- using coupons in store and getting secret reward.

- sharing your thrilling coupon game experience with Facebook and Twitter friends.

Now our registered merchants are eager to offer you 30,000+ free coffee, milk tea and more! How to get those amazing deals?

Step 1: signup for NearByr,

Step 2: enter a promo code provided by our merchant or find nearby specials on our map,

Step 3: check in to obtain the coupons!

Let’s make deals social and get started today!

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Option B:

Hey!! Our registered merchants are eager to offer you 30,000+ free coffee, milk tea and more! How to get those amazing deals?

Step 1: signup for NearByr,

Step 2: enter a promo code provided by our merchant or find nearby specials on our map,

Step 3: check in to obtain the coupons and enjoy the free stuff!

NearByr is not a traditional local deal finder app. Our merchant offers diverse prizes with limited quota, and the closer to check in the venue, the better the prize you may obtain. To enhance your check-in capability, you can buy ‘magic’ from nearby venues and use it in the game. Sounds fun, right? We offer far more than that. Players may meet each other at the venue at the same time, which means unique social experiences.

So let’s make deals social and get started today!

Key features:

- picking up nearby ‘widgets’.

- collecting ‘coins’ when ‘widgets’ get mature, no matter they belong to you or your friends!

- buying ‘magic’ with ‘coins’ from any local store.

- taking advantages when check in venue with ‘magic’, or running for your own prize!

- using coupons in store and getting secret rewards.

- sharing all fun with your friends on Facebook and Twitter.