Best Re-Write Challenge for "I felt the rain raining down on me."

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Best Re-Write Challenge for "I felt the rain raining down on me."

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Answer 1

Gentle at first, but soon big, laughing splashes. A soaking, cleansing rain for its own sake. As if it didn't matter that I was there at all.

Answer 2

I felt a tiny droplet on my hand, so light that I wondered whether I had imagined it. When no more drops fell, I became convinced that it had either been a passing bird or the passing of my sanity. Then, as quickly as the thought had formed, the heavens burst in a drenching deluge, God's vengeance upon my freshly drycleaned suede coat. I flipped off the heavens and sprinted toward the safety of the Pontiac.

Answer 3

Tears the heavens dared not shed for months cascade from the darkened sky, drenching me from head to foot. I turn my face upward, embracing the way eternity tries to pour itself into me.

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Best Re-Write Challenge for "I felt the rain raining down on me."

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