Book readers/ lovers i NEED your input: As some of you know, i'm currently writing my first YA novel. I had some great feedback during my pitch and the publisher got back in touch with me to ask me to submit it formally to them. Now i'm working to a deadline and the full novel is needed by May but i've only written 7 chapters but there are some gaps between them. I'm writing magical realism (i hope). One of my gaps is Chapter 4. I've written Chapter 1, 2 and 3, and then 5, 6 and 8 (as well as a much later chapter). Basically i have already introduced the concept of my theme: Ethereal Emissaries and what they do in my version of reality. My last chapter from my Ethereal Emissary's point of view left off with him headed to Civitatis Superne- the Celestial City to have something fixed he believes needs fixing but doesn't. Would you as a reader expect at Chapter 4 to be introduced to the Civitatis Superne or would you feel a bigger and better payoff would come as the reader to wait to see